In response to Writing 101, Day 9: Camouflage.

No cover can camouflage

Vacant lots for eyes

Murky subterrain for mind

 

Lost and abandoned

In a kafkaesque labyrinth

Haunted by white mice

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Posted by Mara Eastern

I'm a sardonic blogger, snapper, scribbler and rhymer; a virtual space invader who indulges in cheerful negativism, morbid self-deprecation and bleak humour.

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  1. You send shivers into my mind as I see apparitions floating in horror as a horde of rats pursue her!

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    1. I don’t know what’s wrong with me that I keep on producing creepy poems 😮 Hopefully you were not too scared! 😀

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  2. you made your point with a splash of darkness.

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    1. Thank you for your lovely comment, hope I didn’t scare you too much 😉

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  3. That’s Mara! That’s deep and camouflaged! Brava!

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    1. Ha, thank you! I dug deep in the nasty corners of my mind for sure.

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  4. Actually it has the feel of a muddled Sunday-morning-brain after too much booze, not enough sleep, and troubled dreams.

    … or maybe that’s just my Sunday mornings ….

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    1. Ha 😀 ! Yep, that’s my Sunday afternoon, not just morning. I know what I’m talking about.

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