I hope to be hysterically hilarious. But maybe I'm just hysterical.
In response to Writing 101, Day 4: Seconds.
from top floor
A change of heart
Morbid and beautiful. That’s a lovely poem, I could feel the impact.
You said it so nicely. Thank you a lot.
You’re very welcome.
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Once you leap there is no turning back; you must fall. Only if you survive do you get a chance to make a change for another time. This is so great 🙂
Thank you for your lovely comment! I’m glad my little morbid poem didn’t depress you 🙂
You are welcome, Mara…I live on Earth, my friend, nothing depresses me anymore 🙂 🙂
Excellent! That’s the spirit 🙂
Hit me hard! Dark, I really love!
Great short poem, you have!
A fellow dark side lover, excellent 🙂 Thank you for stopping by and see you around in “class”!
Definitely! A lot of my previous posts are dark. I mean disturbingly dark! 😀
Now I must read back through your blog! Disturbingly dark is enticing 😉
Indeed! My recent posts are somehow a bit positive. But majority of my fictions for the past few months are really disturbing! 😀 I somehow signed out because its holiday! Haha
Oh don’t let holiday interfere with your dark side 😉 I for one won’t…
Haha! Truly. My latest post for Day 6 is now, a bit, dark! (haha)
Yep. I’ve seen and appreciated your food for thought.
That was wicked! Changed his mind a little too late. Brilliant!
I like to torture my characters, apparently 😮 Thanks a lot for your lovely comment!
You are welcome 😉
…wow… that must suck to be changing your mind during the fall !!! I’d imagine the fall being so nice and beautiful, with the wind in your hair, that you’d almost be thinking *once more!*… Too bad we’ll never know…
…btw – I can’t get your poem out of my head – I think I’d need to fill a page in my art journal with it 😉 I also had to think of the French movie “hate” – do you happen to know it? It starts very dramatic – a voice telling a story about a man that falls from a tall building. The end of the story is unforgettable – the thoughts of the jumper get explained – wait, I found it here for you: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Uz9vgtXq_Hs
I’m genuinely sorry that you got my poem stuck in your head 😮 I hope my latest poem, also featuring a dead man, won’t give you more nightmares. I obviously love to kill my characters 😉 The film you mention looks so interesting that I’ve just started downloading it to watch…
Oh no – don’t be sorry at all!!! That’s what art is all about – if you manage to touch somebody’s mind then you’ve done it very well, right 🙂 ? Oh really? Fantastic!!! It’s SUCH a good dramatic movie and very weird and whimsical in its own way… Let me know what you thought of it, and enjoy it!!!
I only looked at the beginning of the movie so far, and it’s definitely whimsical, in a good way! I think I’ll like it 🙂
There are many whimsical scenes in there… the cow, the old man in the toilet… 😉 Enjoy the movie 😀
If I weren’t hooked before, I’d be now 😉 !
It’s definitely an intriguing thought – to think what a person who jumps thinks and wonder if the jumper changes her/his mind or just “enjoys” the fall. And even worse when the jumper didn’t want to jump but fell accidentally. Now I’m scaring myself, ha…
Oh I totally get you!!! The thought always crosses my mind when standing next to high cliffs – what if the wind blows me off and I’m falling? Would I spend the last seconds freaking out or try to make the “best” out of it and “enjoy” what it’s like to fall freely…?! WICKED X-D !!!
I don’t think I want to find out so much 😉
P.S. But we can always think the jumper was a bungee jumper!
…hmmmmmm… but I don’t think a bungee jumper would change his mind mid-way, do you 😉 ?
You got me…
…now you must overwrite the whole thing again, that doesn’t work… 😉 Just kiddin’
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